Day

Horizon gives birth
Bright yellow dwarf chases night
Illumination
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Amato Avatar
August 9, 2009 at 3:38 PM
WOW! I love all your poems. Your Haiku is excellent. So glad you are posting these treasures. Don't stop writing, write on...
Burton Avatar
August 5, 2009 at 7:05 PM
Great piece and I really enjoyed it alot. Enjoy your day. :)
Brown Avatar
August 4, 2009 at 9:44 AM
Good afternoon . I enjoyed reading your wonderful Haiku poem today. Love, Carol
Chircop Avatar
August 4, 2009 at 4:13 AM
i love the bright yellow dwarf illuninating my days-well penned James---------------charma
Goff Avatar
August 3, 2009 at 6:35 PM
very original! James...your mind freely associates, a sign of a good poet! and thanks for your warm comments...jim
Arteaga Avatar
August 3, 2009 at 6:00 PM
OoOoOooo nice way of way of describing a sunrise, could see the visuals in m head, great haiku
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