Dawn's Light Tableau

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Tableau
The Tableau, a poetry form created by Emily Romano, consists of one or more verses, each having six lines. Each line should have five syllables. There is no set rhyme scheme, although rhyme may be present. The title should contain the word tableau.

Night subdues color till Dawn's light pierces its indistinct heart and it bleeds scarlet onto crimson smeared alabaster clouds. (Tableau) 3/18/2021 Tableau - 6 Lines Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Joseph May

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Josefina Costales

Date: 4/4/2021 5:48:00 PM

This is an intriguing poetry form. Few lines which by its brevity demands a choice of words that can catch the imagination.

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/5/2021 6:31:00 AM

Thanks Josefina, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

D.W. Rodgers

Date: 4/4/2021 11:02:00 AM

Nicely captured Emle - though what is the rhyme "red sky at morning- sailors take warning.

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/4/2021 2:13:00 PM

Thanks D.W., I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

David Mohn

Date: 3/26/2021 5:47:00 PM

such lushly vivid writing Emile...congratulations on this beauty

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/27/2021 8:11:00 AM

Thanks David, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/26/2021 1:26:00 PM

Hi Emile, This is just beautiful. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/27/2021 8:10:00 AM

Thanks Alexis, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 3/26/2021 12:21:00 PM

I love your use of color and the description of dawn piercing the heart of morning to bleed scarlet and crimson on alabaster clouds. Wonderful image! Truly creative. Congratulations on your win!

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/27/2021 8:09:00 AM

Thanks Sam, as always, I appreciate your encouraging comments my friend, Emile.