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DAWNs DELIGHT

I’m out of mind and sound is dawn’s delight. A trip, I take, around huddle of trees. The splice of pink and purple cane is sweet. With warbling voice, blackcap chorus excite. Break of lull’by, and brightly colored breeze. I’m out of mind and sound is dawn’s delight. The oaks, disrobe the night, outlook upbeat. Their leaves, in burst of honey-love, do please. The splice of pink and purple cane is sweet. I hear the flute and harp; heaven’s sans white. Reclaiming perch, I slink from sheets with ease I’m out of mind and sound is dawn’s delight. Come sun, from place of rest, and moon retreat, And open thither heartbeat of birds and bees. The splice of pink and purple cane is sweet. Robin redbreast whistling with all his might. The kodachrome of ev’ry breath, I seize. I’m out of mind and sound is dawn’s delight. The splice of pink and purple cane is sweet.

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Date: 5/29/2024 7:44:00 PM
Gorgeous, gorgeous writing, Kim-in-ator.... <3 so glad you write for Poetrysoup...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/30/2024 6:32:00 AM
Thank you! I’m likewise glad for your friendship and poetry on The Soup! :)
Date: 5/29/2024 6:00:00 AM
This are not so easy to write but you have done an excellent joy with this one. Thank you for sharing it with us. I appreciate the honor of being in your winners' list. Sara K
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/29/2024 6:32:00 AM
You’re welcome, Sara! It was delightful. I don’t know why it took so long to fill up! It was not a hard contest. Thank you for your comment. I try to stretch my wings every now and again.
Date: 5/29/2024 4:06:00 AM
What a unique write Kim. Dawn reminds me of holidays we always started our trip with, i always open our curtains about half an hour before dawn, it is my favorite time of the day. Love your poem, Hugs, blessings, Jennifer
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/29/2024 6:30:00 AM
I love your tradition! How smart! xxoo
Date: 5/28/2024 1:10:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your lovely write. The early dawn is so pretty just like this write... Have A Blessed Day Writing Away..........
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/28/2024 2:54:00 PM
Have a blessed day, sweet poet! Thank you ~ Kim
Date: 5/28/2024 11:30:00 AM
Kim, I'm there! Feels wonderful. You've captured the feeling of dawn in a beautiful way.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/28/2024 11:53:00 AM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 5/28/2024 10:25:00 AM
Kim, I agree with Victor, this is wonderful descriptive with so many unique images like "the splice of pink and purple cane is sweet," "kodachrome of ev'ry breath, I seize." A lovely song of morning expressed in the villanelle's song! Blessings for your every morning in pink and purple song!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/28/2024 11:57:00 AM
Thanks for that sweet blessing and comment. Blessings to you, Sam!
Date: 5/28/2024 9:46:00 AM
Great descriptive verse. Your dawn is simply a delight. Great imagery. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/28/2024 11:53:00 AM
I appreciate your comment, my friend! Hugs ~ Kim

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