Dawn To Dust

Shining bright and soaring high peace and love within my eyes,
But one day u took it all away you shattered my heart and left without a say.
How could u hurt me u said u where there, you said u loved me, you said you cared!
I trusted u with all my soul but i guess i'm a fool for believing you.
Now in the dark pain & hate i my eyes,
Somedays i wish i could just die because theres nothing left of my once joyful life,
No reason to go on, no reason to fight
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Siedzikowski Avatar
October 30, 2009 at 5:46 PM
This multi-faceted gem of a poem shines brightly within the sorrow that it projects.You are a very creative and talented writer. Sincerely,Eric
Shango Avatar
March 25, 2009 at 7:20 AM
If you can write it like this, you can fight. The pen is mightier than the sword, proven by Dante. Love
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