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Dawn To Dust

Shining bright and soaring high peace and love within my eyes, But one day u took it all away you shattered my heart and left without a say. How could u hurt me u said u where there, you said u loved me, you said you cared! I trusted u with all my soul but i guess i'm a fool for believing you. Now in the dark pain & hate i my eyes, Somedays i wish i could just die because theres nothing left of my once joyful life, No reason to go on, no reason to fight

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/30/2009 5:46:00 PM
This multi-faceted gem of a poem shines brightly within the sorrow that it projects.You are a very creative and talented writer. Sincerely,Eric
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Date: 3/25/2009 7:20:00 AM
If you can write it like this, you can fight. The pen is mightier than the sword, proven by Dante. Love
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