Andrea Dietrich Poet Verse

Dawn To Dusk

dawn
rises
splendidly
with amber rays
spreading across sky 
the joy of new day’s light

magic glazes the sky
as days seamlessly
pass into nights
painting rich
hues at
dusk


Aug 18, 2021
For The Merse Poetry Contest: Glory of nature
Sponsor: Malabika Ray Choudhury

Malabika's Merse form: this descriptive verse of two stanzas - starts with one word, one syllable - goes up to six lines with six syllables (increasing syllables). Second stanza vice versa - begins with six, and it ends with one word, one syllable (decreasing).

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Paula Goldsmith September 4, 2021 at 8:59 AM Congratulations on your win. A pretty sky write. I love the sky in the many colors it has for us to enjoy. Have a blessed day/weekend.................

Paul Callus September 1, 2021 at 12:14 AM I enjoyed this 'merse' poem of yours Andrea (including the inverted comparison of dawn and dusk). Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul

Susan Ashley August 31, 2021 at 7:53 PM Dear Andrea, you capture the splendor of dawn to dusk with beautiful finesse. Congratulations for your excellent win in Mala's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Carol Mitra August 31, 2021 at 7:31 PM You have captured the light beautifully in your lovely poem dear Andrea....Congrats on your win all the love :)

Malabika Ray Choudhury August 31, 2021 at 4:24 PM Congratulations, Andrea, on your fabulous win. You have made my new form amazing with your golden pen. Love ~ Mala

Joanna Daniel August 21, 2021 at 1:31 AM Well written Merse, Andrea, I must say, it's a beautiful form to pen:)

Jennifer Proxenos August 20, 2021 at 11:37 AM Andrea, such wonderful display of words you have chosen for this splendid write - hope your weekend is great! Best of luck my friend, Jennifer.

Anitha Jayasankar August 19, 2021 at 9:59 AM So beautifully picturised from dawn to dusk dear Ria... Best wishes and hugs... ~ Ani

Victor Buhagiar August 19, 2021 at 1:49 AM Is this different from an Etheree? No matter. Very well written. Hugs.

Supraja Kannan August 18, 2021 at 11:56 PM absolutely beautiful... definitely a winner...

Delice Arleen Skelly August 18, 2021 at 7:53 PM A seamless look at an unfolding day...Nice...Delice

Vijay Pandit August 18, 2021 at 10:31 AM Enjoyed the hues from dawn to dusk. Splendid write, Andrea.

Tom Cunningham August 18, 2021 at 9:21 AM You captured the day well in your verse Andrea. Tom