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Dawn To Dusk

dawn rises splendidly with amber rays spreading across sky the joy of new day’s light magic glazes the sky as days seamlessly pass into nights painting rich hues at dusk Aug 18, 2021 For The Merse Poetry Contest: Glory of nature Sponsor: Malabika Ray Choudhury Malabika's Merse form: this descriptive verse of two stanzas - starts with one word, one syllable - goes up to six lines with six syllables (increasing syllables). Second stanza vice versa - begins with six, and it ends with one word, one syllable (decreasing).

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Date: 9/4/2021 8:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A pretty sky write. I love the sky in the many colors it has for us to enjoy. Have a blessed day/weekend.................
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Date: 9/1/2021 12:14:00 AM
I enjoyed this 'merse' poem of yours Andrea (including the inverted comparison of dawn and dusk). Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul
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Date: 8/31/2021 7:53:00 PM
Dear Andrea, you capture the splendor of dawn to dusk with beautiful finesse. Congratulations for your excellent win in Mala's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 8/31/2021 7:31:00 PM
You have captured the light beautifully in your lovely poem dear Andrea....Congrats on your win all the love :)
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Date: 8/31/2021 4:24:00 PM
Congratulations, Andrea, on your fabulous win. You have made my new form amazing with your golden pen. Love ~ Mala
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Date: 8/21/2021 1:31:00 AM
Well written Merse, Andrea, I must say, it's a beautiful form to pen:)
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Date: 8/20/2021 11:37:00 AM
Andrea, such wonderful display of words you have chosen for this splendid write - hope your weekend is great! Best of luck my friend, Jennifer.
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Date: 8/19/2021 9:59:00 AM
So beautifully picturised from dawn to dusk dear Ria... Best wishes and hugs... ~ Ani
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Date: 8/19/2021 1:49:00 AM
Is this different from an Etheree? No matter. Very well written. Hugs.
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Date: 8/18/2021 11:56:00 PM
absolutely beautiful... definitely a winner...
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Date: 8/18/2021 7:53:00 PM
A seamless look at an unfolding day...Nice...Delice
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Date: 8/18/2021 10:31:00 AM
Enjoyed the hues from dawn to dusk. Splendid write, Andrea.
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Date: 8/18/2021 9:21:00 AM
You captured the day well in your verse Andrea. Tom
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