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Dawn She's So Beautiful

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Dawn She's So Beautiful I went up to the lake to fish early morning reverie. She was peaking over my shoulders, Dawn, illuminating my trail, my steps, past tall oaks and scattered underbrush, where I saw a bright eyed deer holding my stare before darting off and little rabbits making a beehive back to home. As the early morning undressed my piquing ears touched by birds singing in the shower, garbling in unison to one another, like those little blue robins I would love to cuddle. As I walk the chill melts and the fog from my lips lessen, as I walk in cadence to the masses of flying insects, bees and butterflies I see flirting with blossoms. My eyes look up at the open skies, nature, my heart skips a rope like a child, as daylight breaks ... Dawn leading the way. She's so beautiful, her reverie, I wish I could catch and covet. connie pachecho 8/3/17

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