Dawn Rises On the River Bend

'Tis still beneath a cloudy sky
where the river’s flowing gently by,
Red Gums live an artists dream,
dead brothers… lifeless in the stream.

Reed beds brown along the bank
have winters chill now here to thank,
as does the willows, yellowed leaves
about to fall with freshening breeze.

Shadows blur below the shimmer…
There's a ring of waves, a leaping swimmer!
Wood Ducks glide before their wake
passed houseboats tethered to their stake.

Cormorants with laborious flight
interrupt a Noisy Mynah’s fight,
and Pelicans unmoving seem,
as they gently glide upstream.

The mist no longer rise’s white.
The sun breaks through with lemon light…
Bend in the river looks forlorn,
as day takes over from the dawn.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Delaney Avatar
September 20, 2015 at 2:40 PM
There is nothing as serene as a river scene...love the description of lemon light.....I have one nit with the word passed thinking it should be spelled past...Correct me if I'm wrong....Good on you, Laurie. Keep writing. SuZ
Laurie Avatar
September 25, 2015 at 2:25 AM
G'day Suzanne... thank you for your comment Suzanne. I think the error is not with the word passed, but there should be a semi-colon on line 3. Thanks for making me aware - catch you soon - Lindsay
Pinet Avatar
August 9, 2015 at 11:17 AM
A depiction of the dawn before the awakening as nature subtly and methodically changes the landscape and ushers in a new rejuvenating energy that uplifts our spirits and hopes. Emile. #7
Laurie Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 10:54 PM
Thank you Emile... your comment is a perfect description - Lindsay
Williams Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 4:37 AM
Hello Lindsay, Just beautiful---you took me there.....kind regards----John
Laurie Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 10:50 PM
G'day John... aren't we lucky that we don't have to travel to visit scenes like this - thank you John - Lindsay
Beaufort Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 5:17 PM
We forget that you are experiencing winter. This is beautiful. We have magnificent places to be and to take in!
Laurie Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 10:47 PM
G'day Duke... yes, but our plum trees are about to flower, so spring is just around the corner. I think beauty is around us wherever we are - Lindsay
Fleming Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 1:00 PM
Damn! Forgot the damn seven. Cheers, Lindsay! :) john
Fleming Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 12:58 PM
Excellent little poem - most impressed!! You have captured a beautiful fleeting moment in time...well done. :) john P.s A Seven!
Laurie Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 10:42 PM
Thank you for your kind comment John... sitting on the bank of the Murray River early in the morning forced my hand to write what I saw - Lindsay
Woods    Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 3:17 AM
Well written and really enjoyed the imagery.
Laurie Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 10:39 PM
G'day Mark... I'm pleased you enjoyed this morning scene on the Murray River. Thanks for commenting - Lindsay
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