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Dawn of a New Life

Pain consumed me, but you approved me. No matter that i was about to fade. Your eyes brought me back so here with you i stayed. Anger pressed down on me. It blinded me so i couldnt see. The way I was acting was not what i felt. The strikes i made were below the belt. I have stuck by you since then. Our hardships are nothing but past sins. My feelings for you are something Ive never felt before. I cant describe just how much you make my heart soar. Look at you, your beautiful inside and out. Feelings build up every day it makes me want to shout. All i know is that your the girl for me. The only girl my eyes see. I have a feeling that this will go far. We just have to remember who we both truly are. This is a Dawn of A New Life. There will be no more strife.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/4/2015 1:56:00 AM
Dustin, I enjoyed reading this good and old verse tonight:-) Wishing you a fun safe 4th of July. ~luv~ LINDA
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Date: 6/8/2009 12:50:00 PM
This poem is breath-taking, simply wonderful....a beautiful piece indeed
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