Dawn In October

Dawn wakens with peach tassels in her hair Adorning trees with embroidered splendor, While daylight circles through gold flakes mid-air That I wonder if such charm is just a dream; Like a lush tableau, an October theme Glorious yet soft as Mother Nature’s lore. O how can this brief pageant make me gleam? So I lift my arms in holy prayer. One Specific Rhyme Scheme Contest of Laura Loo 11/7/2016
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November 9, 2016 at 7:00 AM
Hi Nette, Congratulations on your fine win:-) Alexis
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November 8, 2016 at 1:54 PM
beautiful poem Nette :) thank you for being a part of my contest and congratulations on your placement :) -luloo
Smith Avatar
November 7, 2016 at 2:21 PM
Very beautiful nette
Turner Avatar
November 7, 2016 at 2:08 PM
This poem is what is charming and dreamy,. Really beautiful, nette.
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November 7, 2016 at 12:29 PM
Oh yes indeed Nette. I thank my God every day for the beauty He has surrounded me with. If you look around you no matter what you can usually find something to be thankful for. Well done. God Bless, JB
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November 7, 2016 at 8:58 AM
Heartfelt! You surely dipped your pen in the inkwell of morning's spell!
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November 7, 2016 at 8:43 AM
Just WOW! I got carried away with the grandeur of your poetic language!
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