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Dawn In October

Dawn wakens with peach tassels in her hair Adorning trees with embroidered splendor, While daylight circles through gold flakes mid-air That I wonder if such charm is just a dream; Like a lush tableau, an October theme Glorious yet soft as Mother Nature’s lore. O how can this brief pageant make me gleam? So I lift my arms in holy prayer. One Specific Rhyme Scheme Contest of Laura Loo 11/7/2016

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Date: 11/9/2016 7:00:00 AM
Hi Nette, Congratulations on your fine win:-) Alexis
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Date: 11/8/2016 1:54:00 PM
beautiful poem Nette :) thank you for being a part of my contest and congratulations on your placement :) -luloo
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Date: 11/7/2016 2:21:00 PM
Very beautiful nette
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Date: 11/7/2016 2:08:00 PM
This poem is what is charming and dreamy,. Really beautiful, nette.
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Date: 11/7/2016 12:29:00 PM
Oh yes indeed Nette. I thank my God every day for the beauty He has surrounded me with. If you look around you no matter what you can usually find something to be thankful for. Well done. God Bless, JB
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Date: 11/7/2016 8:58:00 AM
Heartfelt! You surely dipped your pen in the inkwell of morning's spell!
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Date: 11/7/2016 8:43:00 AM
Just WOW! I got carried away with the grandeur of your poetic language!
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