Dawn Fog

fog hovers around wrapping hills in shades of gray ~ sun breaks through at dawn
Written October 22, 2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Gentile Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 6:04 AM
Milt, your haiku is perfect in its well expressed imagery!! Well done and Happy Sunday!!!
Krutsinger Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 4:17 AM
exquisite imagery Hank; every line.
Kriticos Avatar
October 22, 2022 at 7:00 PM
Beautiful imagery my friend. Your words give an undeniable vision!
Hankins Avatar
October 22, 2022 at 9:08 PM
Thank you so much, Kyle. It is good to hear from you, and I hope you are having fabulous weekend.
Parker Avatar
October 22, 2022 at 6:36 PM
Driving from Fresno to San Jose on a ground hugging, tule fog morning.....dangerous stuff. Nice image presentation. ~;o/
Hankins Avatar
October 22, 2022 at 6:41 PM
Thanks, Arlo. Appreciated your read and comment.
Logan Avatar
October 22, 2022 at 5:45 PM
This could be an early winter morning down south. There are no hills but enough bodies of water for the high humidity to be foggy. Good lines, Milt.
Hankins Avatar
October 22, 2022 at 6:42 PM
Thanks, Jenna. So true! I've driven through an early morning fog around Savannah.
Tor Avatar
October 22, 2022 at 4:54 PM
Wonderful imagery in reading this reminds me of the smokey Mountains... Thank you for posting...
Hankins Avatar
October 22, 2022 at 6:42 PM
Lovely part of the country, Michael. Yes, I've seen fog in the Smokies.
Chies Avatar
October 22, 2022 at 4:49 PM
I think dawn is the best part of the day, dawn on the beach is even better. the image you described turned out excellent, it's exactly what I see many times when I walk in the morning.
Hankins Avatar
October 22, 2022 at 6:43 PM
Thanks, Marco. Good to hear from you.
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