Dawn Fog

fog hovers around wrapping hills in shades of gray ~ sun breaks through at dawn Written October 22, 2022

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Mike Gentile

Date: 10/23/2022 6:04:00 AM

Milt, your haiku is perfect in its well expressed imagery!! Well done and Happy Sunday!!!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/23/2022 4:17:00 AM

exquisite imagery Hank; every line.

Kyle Kriticos

Date: 10/22/2022 7:00:00 PM

Beautiful imagery my friend. Your words give an undeniable vision!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/22/2022 9:08:00 PM

Thank you so much, Kyle. It is good to hear from you, and I hope you are having fabulous weekend.

Arlo Parker

Date: 10/22/2022 6:36:00 PM

Driving from Fresno to San Jose on a ground hugging, tule fog morning.....dangerous stuff. Nice image presentation. ~;o/

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/22/2022 6:41:00 PM

Thanks, Arlo. Appreciated your read and comment.

Jenna Logan

Date: 10/22/2022 5:45:00 PM

This could be an early winter morning down south. There are no hills but enough bodies of water for the high humidity to be foggy. Good lines, Milt.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/22/2022 6:42:00 PM

Thanks, Jenna. So true! I've driven through an early morning fog around Savannah.

Michael Tor

Date: 10/22/2022 4:54:00 PM

Wonderful imagery in reading this reminds me of the smokey Mountains... Thank you for posting...

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/22/2022 6:42:00 PM

Lovely part of the country, Michael. Yes, I've seen fog in the Smokies.

Marco Chies

Date: 10/22/2022 4:49:00 PM

I think dawn is the best part of the day, dawn on the beach is even better. the image you described turned out excellent, it's exactly what I see many times when I walk in the morning.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/22/2022 6:43:00 PM

Thanks, Marco. Good to hear from you.