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Dawn Chirps a Melody

Dawn chirps a melody Birds of promise beckon me High-fliers inspire emulators to flap our wings, become creators Ahead lies adventure sunlight, the perfect mentor In my pinions, the day awaits rise and shine, tempt the fates

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/10/2023 9:07:00 PM

Lovely!

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 12/10/2023 6:36:00 PM

This is an elegant poem. I enjoyed the image of the bird. Thank you for this sunshine poem.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/10/2023 6:41:00 PM

I figure that in the literal and figurative darkness of present-day life in America, we can all use a little 'chirping up!' Cheers, gw

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 12/10/2023 3:01:00 PM

As a new dawn breaks, new opportunities await. I loved your couplet, Gershon; it gave us hope for a more peaceful future.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/10/2023 6:46:00 PM

Peace emanates from within us. Without is just a noisy din. ~ gw

Daniel Turner

Date: 12/10/2023 8:26:00 AM

I like this inspirational poem, GW. Spread your wings and fly!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/10/2023 6:50:00 PM

Let's bolt this popstand, Daniel.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/10/2023 5:14:00 AM

an uplifting and inspirational couplet...I liked 'flame our wings, become creators' Such personal power in those words. Have a splendid Sunday, Sara

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/10/2023 6:51:00 PM

Thank you, Sara. And here's to a great week...