Dawn

darkness lightens rays beams of faint distant light illuminate the horizon in views less dim emerging anew the paints of the gods reflect their color tinged passion for another day bright beautiful and with it hope clean and oure dreams of greater things and the sky looks down smiling

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Skat A

Date: 7/26/2015 1:01:00 AM

ROBERT:) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~

Skat A

Date: 7/2/2015 12:25:00 PM

Hi Robert, this is sweet, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/2/2015 11:59:00 AM

Robert, a beautiful stunning first poem.:), A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/2/2015 11:26:00 AM

- Welcome to P- Soup, Robert :) - Thank you for your first poem :) - A great poem - I'll be glad to read more from you in the future :) - I wish you good luck with your poems and comments - // Anne-Lise :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/2/2015 12:11:00 PM

- I'm here to learn ..... and I've learned a lot already :)))

Robert Riseling
Date: 7/2/2015 11:31:00 AM

Your kind words are appreciated - suggestions for improvement accepted.