Dawn

darkness lightens
rays beams of faint
distant light
illuminate the horizon
in views less dim

emerging anew
the paints of the gods
reflect their color tinged
passion for another day
bright beautiful

and with it
hope clean and oure
dreams of greater things
and the sky
looks down
smiling
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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July 26, 2015 at 1:01 AM
ROBERT:) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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July 2, 2015 at 12:25 PM
Hi Robert, this is sweet, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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July 2, 2015 at 11:59 AM
Robert, a beautiful stunning first poem.:), A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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July 2, 2015 at 11:26 AM
- Welcome to P- Soup, Robert :) - Thank you for your first poem :) - A great poem - I'll be glad to read more from you in the future :) - I wish you good luck with your poems and comments - // Anne-Lise :)
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July 2, 2015 at 12:11 PM
- I'm here to learn ..... and I've learned a lot already :)))
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July 2, 2015 at 11:31 AM
Your kind words are appreciated - suggestions for improvement accepted.
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