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Dawn

Oh, dawn,
Awake us not,
We lay in bed, asleep,
Embraced – naked, she clings to me,
My love...

Copyright © Max Corvus | Year Posted 2015

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June 15, 2015 at 3:09 PM

Congrats on your placement in my contest..Thanks for your participation..Sara

September 16, 2015 at 7:57 AM

Thanks

June 11, 2015 at 4:50 PM

Congratulations on your win,Max, hugs dear friend Eve

September 16, 2015 at 7:58 AM

Thank you :)

June 11, 2015 at 3:55 PM

Hi Max, Congratulations........ SKAT

June 11, 2015 at 4:33 PM

Hi again. Thanks for so many comments you've left on my site so far.

Poet Destroyer A

June 11, 2015 at 2:11 PM

Max, Congratulations on your win. LOVE LINDA"

June 11, 2015 at 4:30 PM

Thanks. Well, honorable mentions isn't actually a win, but fair enough. Love, Max

June 10, 2015 at 10:12 PM

I don't think I've ever seen a sensual cinquain before. Great work! Congrats on your Honorable Mention, Max! Love, Kim

June 11, 2015 at 2:56 AM

Thanks

Pandita Sietesantos

June 5, 2015 at 9:25 AM

Awww - how sensuously beautiful - an excellent romantic cinquain! Love it and rate it a "7." Pandita

June 5, 2015 at 1:04 AM

Hi Max, it takes and it gives ones last bite before the sun wakes the soul. Enjoyed the cinquain. SKAT

June 5, 2015 at 1:47 AM

Thenks, please do check your inbox if you have not done it yet. I've a message for you.

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