Dawn

Dawn mused skies and heart in turn Through dew hazed eyes, a tear is veiled Emotive hues as daybreak yearns Dawn mused skies and heart in turn Horizon blushed as night adjourns A new day’s face, softly detailed Dawn mused skies and heart in turn Through dew hazed eyes, a tear is veiled 17 Aug 2014 Zeugma - Poetry Contest Zeugma Line - Dawn mused skies and heart in turn

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/2/2014 9:24:00 AM

Thank you for participating in my contest..I am sorry to be so long in saying my congrats to each one..I enjoyed reading this one..Sara

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/22/2014 12:30:00 PM

This is very beautiful David. Congratulations on your win.

Paul Callus

Date: 9/22/2014 10:39:00 AM

Enjoyable write about dawn, David. Like how the horizon blushes and the last rep. line is very touching. Congrats on your win in Sara's contest. // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/22/2014 1:21:00 AM

Pretty imagery in this one. By the way, you need to point out which lines are zeugma as the requirements for the contest. I put my lines at the bottom of the page!