David Mohn Poet Triolet

Dawn

Dawn mused skies and heart in turn
Through dew hazed eyes, a tear is veiled
Emotive hues as daybreak yearns
Dawn mused skies and heart in turn
Horizon blushed as night adjourns
A new day’s face, softly detailed
Dawn mused skies and heart in turn
Through dew hazed eyes, a tear is veiled

17 Aug 2014
Zeugma - Poetry Contest
Zeugma Line - Dawn mused skies and heart in turn

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Sara Kendrick October 2, 2014 at 9:24 AM Thank you for participating in my contest..I am sorry to be so long in saying my congrats to each one..I enjoyed reading this one..Sara

Brenda Meier-Hans September 22, 2014 at 12:30 PM This is very beautiful David. Congratulations on your win.

Paul Callus September 22, 2014 at 10:39 AM Enjoyable write about dawn, David. Like how the horizon blushes and the last rep. line is very touching. Congrats on your win in Sara's contest. // paul

Andrea Dietrich August 22, 2014 at 1:21 AM Pretty imagery in this one. By the way, you need to point out which lines are zeugma as the requirements for the contest. I put my lines at the bottom of the page!