Dawn

Those who dream and value Time live to see a Dawn. But doomed into the ruins of a Dinosaur are those that forever Dilly-Dally. For theirs is Drowning and Dropping Till history judges them Harshly.

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Betty Bateson

Date: 4/19/2013 1:15:00 PM

Great poem. Love it.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/7/2012 7:21:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in ~SKAT~'s "Reps vs Dems" contest Ndaba. Love Carol

Ndaba Sibanda
Date: 12/7/2012 11:15:00 AM

Carol, l am excited and pleasantly surprised. THANK YOU.

Ndaba Sibanda

Date: 12/5/2012 5:36:00 PM

THANK YOU. THANK YOU EVERYONE. What has REALLY happened? Can someone kindly fill me in on what l owe these congratulatory messages to?

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/5/2012 1:06:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Ndaba xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/3/2012 5:59:00 PM

N S. :-) CONGRATULATIONS ON A POEM WELL DONE..... ALWAYS & FOREVER~ linda

Skat A

Date: 12/3/2012 5:37:00 PM

thank you for the awesome poem. always~SKAT

Ndaba Sibanda
Date: 12/7/2012 11:21:00 AM

The honour you have bestowed upon me is awesome. This is a special early Christmas gift for me. THANKS for this recognition. l am grateful and encouraged. Keep well.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/2/2012 6:26:00 AM

Excellent poetry you have shared with us Ndaba. I have enjoyed reading it this morning. I will be back Monday to read more. I wish you a wonderful weekend full of sunshine and inspiration. Love, Carol

Ndaba Sibanda
Date: 11/4/2012 7:57:00 AM

That`s very kind of you to say. Thanks, yes it has turned out to be a weekend full of sunshine and inspiration. l hereby crown you a prophetess!