Dawn

The dawn is coming 
As my heart is beating fast...
The night has ended
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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February 17, 2010 at 8:37 AM
Leaves the reader with his or own experiences to fill in between the lines. I see you recently joined Poetry Soup. Welcome! I hope you are enjoying your time spent with us. Karen
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February 17, 2010 at 8:34 AM
wow..... hun, thats great, omg, i never saw that comeing!!! wow, keep writing!!! -D.Dimaio <3
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February 17, 2010 at 8:17 AM
WOW, there a many great haiku coming out today.... Good work my friend.....:JP]
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