Tim Ryerson Poet Narrative

David For David

Oh David, King David
You slew the mocking monster
You cheated
You murdered
You repented
You were forgiven
You were chosen...
composing mighty music
begging deliverance
fearing His wrath
pleading mercy...
May He show such mercy to us

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Carol Sunshine Brown November 15, 2012 at 11:23 AM Congratulations on your win in Cyndi's "David's for David" contest Tim. Love, Carol ~David~ is sure to love every one of the poems written.

Len Gasun November 13, 2012 at 9:18 AM Very beautiful poem/song! A lovely dedication and i love it! Congratulations on your "super win" my dear friend Tim! love/hugs, LG

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl November 13, 2012 at 12:51 AM Congratulations on another win Tim, well done xx

Joseph May November 12, 2012 at 4:57 PM nice tribute Tim...congrats on your win.. well penned

Poet Destroyer A November 12, 2012 at 4:02 PM Tim. love the dedication for David.. take care~ PD

Sara Kendrick November 7, 2012 at 8:53 AM I did not realize that I had not commented on this one..Great work..Sara ...Soup mail..

Anne-Lise Andresen November 7, 2012 at 3:56 AM Bit of a king .... well written for this contest Tim. - Good luck - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud November 7, 2012 at 3:28 AM passionate explosion of the senses, tim, without the cumbersome of exposition.. best wishes and huggs !..:)