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David Flavoured

Enticed by his faceted aspects Political points show his honour Policies opposed, David contests Left wing woke folk admonished Rawness of broad topics examined Cowboy stories of recent history Scenarios derived from within Issues which play contemporary David flavoured, his firm essence Infuses my little with his lot I honestly struggle to explain this ... never missed what I don't got .. A man who won't take crap Shallow hits roll off his jaw My bull wouldn't just lapse - He'd bleed it dry, peace restored Faceless man tells me myriads Written by unwavered conviction Marathon stamina poem olympian I, willing victim to his inflictions Dreaming of David, strange concept - exclusive, by myself for eight years It's a choice to remain alone, heart kept Relic packed away, oddly he endears Hard nosed refusal to enter this century Old school stance pings my deepest vibe Unreasonable, how much it means to me To absorb the jib of David 's scribe Around three years his senior In virus time, located overseas I fixate on his strong demeanour In lurid choc chip fantasies 12th September 2020

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Date: 10/3/2020 6:26:00 PM
I agree, being David-flavored is pretty damn awesome.
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 10/3/2020 10:45:00 PM
.... You found it.....!!!
Date: 9/12/2020 12:55:00 PM
Hi Sigrid choc chip Fantasies are sometimes better than reality, what would life be without them, you have a certain analytical style to your poetry, reminds me of a futuristic computer mind running an algorithmic diagnostic, amazing how you do this and then create a poem from the variables, gobsmacked I am cheers David.
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David Kavanagh
Date: 9/13/2020 2:42:00 PM
I am honestly just delighted when people see something appealing in my poems, I’m only writing about a year or so glad I bumped into you on soup you have some fascinating influential work I’ll be reading more cheers David
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 9/12/2020 8:38:00 PM
Thank you for commenting, Darling David. Your analysis of my workings probably stands quite true. I am /was too close to forest to see the trees. Bless, precious.... I am encombered pleasantly after having indulged in several of your thought provoking poems.

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