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Daughter

As your love star is on the rise You look beautiful with a glow and shine My all best wishes with you My sweet daughter, I love you Being married you will leave me soon Your choice is best, your lover is a moon I will not give you any advice You are intelligent and very wise You are a star in the darkness of my life You will act better than me as a wife You are light and sight of my eyes Having you I feel pride

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/27/2019 12:34:00 PM

Hello Nuzhat Shireen, a beautiful poem for your daughter. Have a nice day my friend.

Mark Toney

Date: 9/10/2019 8:55:00 AM

Nuzhat, welcome to Poetry Soup! This is a delightful, lovely poem to your daughter. I like the metaphor describing her "love star is on the rise" and that she looks "beautiful, with a glow and shine." Excellent. We do not have any daughters, but we have two sons that we're very proud of, and they have wives whom we love very much. ~Mark

Nuzhat Shireen
Date: 9/10/2019 9:53:00 AM

Thank you for your nice words. I got courage from your comment. It will help me to write more.