Nuzhat Shireen Poet Rhyme

Daughter

As your love star is on the rise
You look beautiful  with a glow and shine
My all best wishes with you
My  sweet daughter, I love you
Being married you will leave me soon
Your choice is best, your lover is a moon
I will not give you any advice
You are intelligent and very wise
You are a star in the darkness of my life
You will act better than me as a wife
You are light and sight of my eyes
Having you I feel pride

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Darlene De Beaulieu September 27, 2019 at 12:34 PM Hello Nuzhat Shireen, a beautiful poem for your daughter. Have a nice day my friend.

Mark Toney September 10, 2019 at 8:55 AM Nuzhat, welcome to Poetry Soup! This is a delightful, lovely poem to your daughter. I like the metaphor describing her "love star is on the rise" and that she looks "beautiful, with a glow and shine." Excellent. We do not have any daughters, but we have two sons that we're very proud of, and they have wives whom we love very much. ~Mark Nuzhat Shireen September 10, 2019 at 9:53 AM Thank you for your nice words. I got courage from your comment. It will help me to write more.