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Dat's the Problem

isn't it so funny, how serious we take life
we have to put ourselves above the others
and we call this journey strife
truly all the pressure, comes to us from deep within
and if we were, worth our measure
we would cast away this sin

Copyright © Jerry T Curtis | Year Posted 2014

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Robert Andrew Lyle Date: 5/10/2014 3:37:00 PM We are our next thought and the doubts stop our progress. Great piece Jerry short and tall . I think you must have a poem machine in your room. well done Andy Login to Reply Jerry T Curtis Date: 5/10/2014 4:44:00 PM Thanks Andy, but i think it's the same machine as you have--------maybe a model newer. lol

Toquyen Harrell Date: 5/10/2014 8:22:00 AM Maybe, lol. Got ya. Login to Reply Jerry T Curtis Date: 5/10/2014 4:43:00 PM Toquyen, you had me there, for a moment.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/9/2014 5:27:00 PM OK, I like this one and the way you just used Dat. It made it very "homey" Very down to earth advice at the end of it. I am guilty of taking things too seriously sometimes. when you think about it, many of us are so much more fortunate than the rest of the world living in terrible conditions, we should be overflowing with gratitude!! Login to Reply Jerry T Curtis Date: 5/9/2014 7:17:00 PM We all are being continually brainwashed by television, you me everyone, perhaps with the internet, we will all become so friendly with one another, governments will be unable to start a wars

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/9/2014 5:24:00 PM are you Irish living IN Ireland? I am a combination of many things, like most americans I guess: Irish/scotch/a lot of Welsh/English, etc. Let's see this poem of yours now! Login to Reply Jerry T Curtis Date: 5/9/2014 7:13:00 PM No Andrea, I wish, I am of Irish decent born and raised in New England