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Dat's the Problem

isn't it so funny, how serious we take life we have to put ourselves above the others and we call this journey strife truly all the pressure, comes to us from deep within and if we were, worth our measure we would cast away this sin

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Robert Andrew Lyle

Date: 5/10/2014 3:37:00 PM

We are our next thought and the doubts stop our progress. Great piece Jerry short and tall . I think you must have a poem machine in your room. well done Andy

Jerry T Curtis
Date: 5/10/2014 4:44:00 PM

Thanks Andy, but i think it's the same machine as you have--------maybe a model newer. lol

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 5/10/2014 8:22:00 AM

Maybe, lol. Got ya.

Jerry T Curtis
Date: 5/10/2014 4:43:00 PM

Toquyen, you had me there, for a moment.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/9/2014 5:27:00 PM

OK, I like this one and the way you just used Dat. It made it very "homey" Very down to earth advice at the end of it. I am guilty of taking things too seriously sometimes. when you think about it, many of us are so much more fortunate than the rest of the world living in terrible conditions, we should be overflowing with gratitude!!

Jerry T Curtis
Date: 5/9/2014 7:17:00 PM

We all are being continually brainwashed by television, you me everyone, perhaps with the internet, we will all become so friendly with one another, governments will be unable to start a wars

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/9/2014 5:24:00 PM

are you Irish living IN Ireland? I am a combination of many things, like most americans I guess: Irish/scotch/a lot of Welsh/English, etc. Let's see this poem of yours now!

Jerry T Curtis
Date: 5/9/2014 7:13:00 PM

No Andrea, I wish, I am of Irish decent born and raised in New England