Kim Rodrigues Poet Rhyme

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Darlings

All things bright and beautiful.
All creatures great and small.
All things wise and wonderful.
The Lord God made them all.

Cecil Frances Alexander

DARLINGS

darlings you have my attention
your convention in the pines
starlings in numeration
after sunrise...after sunrise
your whirling murmuration
has my adoration
my ears incline...they incline
i open my door’s habitation
an invitation to see you glide
why hide my smile inside

2/23/2021

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Jennifer Proxenos February 26, 2021 at 10:32 AM Its a darling poem, a darling bird and a darling poetess who wrote it. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer

Gershon Wolf February 23, 2021 at 5:26 PM Love the repetition, the alliteration, the onomatopoeia. Oh yes, btw, it's a darling poem too! Happiness and Light, Kim! :) Jennifer Proxenos February 26, 2021 at 10:36 AM Hey there my Jewish Greco friend, onomatopoeia - enjoyed the use of this apt word in your comment to Kim.Hugs, Jennifer. Kim Rodrigues February 24, 2021 at 6:09 AM Thank you, dear one! I felt so happy inside! God bless you!

Rico Leffanta February 23, 2021 at 10:43 AM A starling doing solitary? No wonder you are hiding your smile! Aloha! Rico Kim Rodrigues February 23, 2021 at 12:41 PM No I saw many! This is just a photo I found :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler February 23, 2021 at 10:34 AM Your picture is a fine complement to this exquisite poem describing opening the door to nature's glory. :) Kim Rodrigues February 23, 2021 at 12:40 PM Thank you, Evelyn!

Sara Kendrick February 23, 2021 at 9:39 AM I like the arrangement of this one. It has good flow, rhythm and rhyme. I like the quote above as well. It is good to know who originally wrote it. Sara Kim Rodrigues February 23, 2021 at 12:41 PM Thank you, sweetie!

Victor Buhagiar February 23, 2021 at 9:24 AM Loved the quotation. Your poem is excellent. Perfect rhyme. Wish I could see those pines with all the birds. ~~ Kim Rodrigues February 23, 2021 at 12:41 PM It was wonderful!

Sara Kendrick February 23, 2021 at 9:04 AM I like the arrangement of this one. It has good flow, rhythm and rhyme. I like the quote above as well. It is good to know who originally wrote it. Sara

Vijay Pandit February 23, 2021 at 5:07 AM Much joy in this rhythmic write, Kim. Convention in the pines--lovely articulation. Beautiful! Kim Rodrigues February 23, 2021 at 5:54 AM Thank you, sweet Vijay! Your positivity always lifts me up!