Gary Smith Poet Rhyme

Darling Can You Hear Me

Darling can you hear me
I'm stood here in the mud,
Wishing I could hold you
Oh that would feel so good.

Darling can you hear me
My rifle's in my hand,
Soon enough we'll be off
Out into no-mans land.

Darling can you hear me
The whistles set to blow,
If I fall remember
How much I love you so.

Darling can you hear me
There's an angel by my side,
She's taking me to heaven
Today my love, I died.

Darling can you hear me
Love does not end with death,
I could feel your loving arms
As I took my final breath.

Darling can you hear me
Weep, yet don't despair,
'Tis only time that parts us
For love is always there.

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Gershon Wolf October 6, 2019 at 7:30 PM You've the heart of a real soldier, Gary. So tenderly, yet concisely penned. Great romantic-inspirational write. Best wishes, Gershon Gary Smith October 7, 2019 at 4:42 AM Thank you Gershon. :)

Caren Krutsinger October 5, 2019 at 10:46 AM Gary, this one is wonderful. Her continuity makes it feel so poetic! Gary Smith October 5, 2019 at 10:48 AM Thank you Caren. :)