Darkpoet

A change in my heart
Yesturday is forgotten
Please, never again
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Delacroix Avatar
March 5, 2011 at 8:21 PM
Great Senryu, Edward! It is not always so easy to forget, when there is pain involved, but it will be forgotten through a change of heart. Well done! Caroline.
Mac Donald Avatar
January 30, 2011 at 11:13 AM
Hi Edwardo! Such a short piece, but still the idea isn't hidden by a league of endless empty lines. Nicely done! Best to you! Mikki
Mehta Avatar
October 20, 2010 at 3:56 PM
Very thoughtgful Senryu with good images, Edward
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October 20, 2010 at 2:49 PM
wow! Edward, amazing let the past stay behind, enjoyed,..p.d.
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