Darkness To Light

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darkness delusion, insentient fearing, craving, contracting ignorance, tamas, wisdom, sattva embracing, healing, flowing spatial, luminous light 04-May-2021

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/4/2021 12:28:00 PM

Gorgeous from one line to the next! "ignorance, tamas, wisdom, sattva"What a wonderful middle part!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 5/4/2021 8:38:00 PM

You have lured me into this form, which I find, is not so easy as it looks :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/4/2021 12:57:00 AM

Great diamante, composed well from one aspect to another.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 5/4/2021 1:34:00 AM

thanks Victor ... just dabbling a bit with this new form, gosh! my grammar is terrible!