Patri Venkata Ramana Poet Verse

Darkness - Tableau

Clicking of beetles
Whispers of scorched leaves
Sniff of burning wood
Eerie silent path
Peered into darkness
With a ray of hope

Tableau - 6 Lines Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Joseph May
Syllable Counter: PS
Date: 21-03-2021
Place: 2nd

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Alexis Y. March 26, 2021 at 1:37 PM Hi Patri, Congratulations on your winning write. Have a great day:-) Alexis Patri Venkata Ramana March 28, 2021 at 8:19 AM Thanks a lot for the compliments.

Joseph May March 26, 2021 at 1:18 PM Congrats on your win Patri, Very nicely penned Patri Venkata Ramana March 28, 2021 at 8:19 AM Thanks a lot for the compliments.

Andrea Dietrich March 26, 2021 at 9:24 AM Very nice. I enjoyed the imagery here! Patri Venkata Ramana March 28, 2021 at 8:18 AM Thanks a lot for the compliments