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Darkness Outside Glass

Inside my fish tank Our sun never goes offline Darkness outside glass Do you think it's probable for me to become a professional writer in the near future?

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Derrick Burton

Date: 8/11/2009 11:32:00 PM

I think you can! why not! it depends on what you are willing to explore as far as styles and words. I love poets that break the rules a little... say something different from time to time, loved this short powerful piece. Enjoy your night. :)

Anthony Souls

Date: 8/10/2009 6:39:00 PM

Hello Catie, Although it would be nice to be a poet as well, I mainly write poetry to improve my writing ability; What I want to be is a Science Fiction writer. I have a couple ideas on the burner, I first wanted to get my ability good enough to write them. I love poetry, however; I really want to be a novelist that may turn into movies. I ask if I'm good enough (skill wise) because I have injuries (22% disabled legally) and I don't know what I will do if it wasn't possible to write for money.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/10/2009 2:55:00 PM

Nice Haiku. What you determine in your heart you can do things worth doing take time and effort. Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/10/2009 2:44:00 PM

Yes if you stay on top of it. But.....you need to watch the economy as it will play a big part in it if you want to make a living doing it. Just my opinion throw it in the fish tank if you don't like it. Love, Carol