Darkness Outside Glass

Inside my fish tank
Our sun never goes offline
Darkness outside glass



Do you think it's probable for me to become a professional writer in the near future?
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Burton Avatar
August 11, 2009 at 11:32 PM
I think you can! why not! it depends on what you are willing to explore as far as styles and words. I love poets that break the rules a little... say something different from time to time, loved this short powerful piece. Enjoy your night. :)
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August 10, 2009 at 6:39 PM
Hello Catie, Although it would be nice to be a poet as well, I mainly write poetry to improve my writing ability; What I want to be is a Science Fiction writer. I have a couple ideas on the burner, I first wanted to get my ability good enough to write them. I love poetry, however; I really want to be a novelist that may turn into movies. I ask if I'm good enough (skill wise) because I have injuries (22% disabled legally) and I don't know what I will do if it wasn't possible to write for money.
Kendrick Avatar
August 10, 2009 at 2:55 PM
Nice Haiku. What you determine in your heart you can do things worth doing take time and effort. Sara
Brown Avatar
August 10, 2009 at 2:44 PM
Yes if you stay on top of it. But.....you need to watch the economy as it will play a big part in it if you want to make a living doing it. Just my opinion throw it in the fish tank if you don't like it. Love, Carol
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