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Darkness of My Soul

Why must I walk alone no one to be with me and share my life. Gloom fills my inside a frown not a smile . Ohh to have to have just one to share my life. We can embrace this life as one. Walk together not alone sharing the best of time and the worst of time . Sit and giggle at a joke or to see a sunrise not alone but as one. 10/22/13 Michael Byte

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Date: 12/25/2013 11:55:00 PM
I love the simplicity in this one and how you plainly tell your longing. Love it. Congrats.
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Michael Byte
Date: 12/26/2013 5:36:00 AM
Thanks Andrea for your comments always look forward to comments on my work. Hope you had good Xmas. Your soup friend Michael
Date: 12/24/2013 3:59:00 AM
Congrats Michael! Each poem in this contest was a gem, I could sense the deepest feelings as they were written. I loved yours too, just couldn't leave this out.. Wish all the poems till the last one here is read by all.. warm regards, gautami
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Michael Byte
Date: 12/24/2013 6:49:00 AM
Thanks Gautami for your comments
Date: 12/24/2013 12:44:00 AM
Enjoyed your beautiful write on a portrait of a poet and congratulations on the win, Michael
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Michael Byte
Date: 12/24/2013 6:48:00 AM
Thanks Dr Ram for comments

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