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As the sun slowly sinks from sight, shapeless shadows morph into dusk as silhouettes silently merge; amidst the mosquitoes and bats. Attracted by dusk's dimming light, the creatures of the night take flight. Luna rises into the sky, gilding the clouds in the heavens as the Milky Way spills its light; across the emptiness of space. Divinely placed, stars mystify, while at the same time, beautify. Sol bleeds at the birth of each day inking ebony skies crimson; and white clouds, cotton-candy pink. And Dawn pierces the heart of night, leaving darkness in disarray; as shifting shadows slip away.

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Date: 8/1/2021 2:24:00 PM
I like this winner. Your work is very descriptive about the peaceful, quiet time of the end day. Congrats on this winner. Sara
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/1/2021 2:30:00 PM
Thanks, Sara, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/12/2021 11:38:00 PM
Sol bleeds at the birth of each day inking ebony skies crimson. Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/13/2021 7:32:00 AM
Thanks, Christuraj, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/4/2021 8:52:00 AM
Beautiful writing, as always, Emile. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
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Date: 7/4/2021 11:12:00 AM
Thanks, Milt, your visits always leave me with a smile my friend, Emile.

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