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Darkness Falls

Dark spaces all around you can only hear one sound ripping through the air while the sun disappears it comes closer and closer as we approach running for life as we should scared of fear as fear should only fear itself is death really that bad? just know when that darkness hits you can't see nor talk all you can do is hear the ripping sound as the darkness falls

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Date: 10/20/2017 6:48:00 AM
Hi, This is not an acrostic, because that comes with a different set of rules. That said, it's a good, dark poem. If I can make a suggestion? Cut the longer lines into a few smaller ones. Welcome to :)PoetrySoup
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