Darkness Falls

Dark spaces all around 
you can only hear one sound ripping through the air while the sun disappears it comes closer and closer as we approach running for life as we should 
scared of fear 
as fear should only fear itself
 is death really that bad?
 just know when that darkness hits you can't see nor talk all you can do is hear the ripping sound as the darkness falls
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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October 20, 2017 at 6:48 AM
Hi, This is not an acrostic, because that comes with a different set of rules. That said, it's a good, dark poem. If I can make a suggestion? Cut the longer lines into a few smaller ones. Welcome to :)PoetrySoup
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