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Darkness Ending

Reflected Shadows. Very deep although shallow. Rejuvinated.

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Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/14/2010 11:54:00 AM

perfect form, enjoyed!!

Skat A

Date: 2/13/2010 5:27:00 PM

Nice how about deep. Great haiku. ...I.T.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/13/2010 1:00:00 AM

hahaha, about your sport poem. I thought it was fairly obvious, but then again, I was always very CURIOUS as a chld too!! (I explained it to LInda marie. hahaha). Hope you did well in the contest with this one. I have not even looked yet at the results. I didn't even do it since I am not a haiku person. Luv, Andrea

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 2/12/2010 10:34:00 PM

Dear Marty, I think I'm going to say "Congratulations" now As I may Forget when YOUR name is in the WINNERS' Circle YOUR Words are " Rejuvinating " YOUR Liege ALWAYS...HG

Margaret Foster

Date: 2/12/2010 8:02:00 PM

The beauty is reflected in your words.....Margaret. thanking you for comments today Marty.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/12/2010 3:36:00 PM

Great Haiku that should be in the winner's circle. Good luck in the contest. Last line great because that would be what I would be if I could see the scene in person. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/12/2010 1:59:00 PM

I like the irony in the line "Very deep although shallow." Somehow, I know exactly what you mean. Great haiku, Marty! Love, Carolyn

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/12/2010 8:44:00 AM

very nice!! enjoyed reading today.

Kim Hilliker

Date: 2/12/2010 7:17:00 AM

Nice Haiku. Thanks for sharing. I enjoyed it.

David Byrne

Date: 2/12/2010 4:53:00 AM

nice one!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/11/2010 11:16:00 PM

a beauty..Charma

John Beam

Date: 2/11/2010 8:03:00 PM

this is also is beatiful I hope you do well and that you dont take this the wrong way but luck runs out I am greatful for the grace of the Lord Jesus and prayers thanks for comment

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/11/2010 7:45:00 PM

Excellent Haiku, Marty! Is this an entry for Raul's Contest? It should be....perfect! Peace, Audrey

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/11/2010 7:03:00 PM

Lovely... u need to enter Raul's new contest Sunrise too. your poetry is too good not to enter ... they are all winners to me.. luv.. "Sweetheart"