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Darkness Ending

Reflected Shadows.
Very deep although shallow.
Rejuvinated.

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Doris Culverhouse

February 14, 2010 at 11:54 AM

perfect form, enjoyed!!

Skat A

February 13, 2010 at 5:27 PM

Nice how about deep. Great haiku. ...I.T.

Andrea Dietrich

February 13, 2010 at 1:00 AM

hahaha, about your sport poem. I thought it was fairly obvious, but then again, I was always very CURIOUS as a chld too!! (I explained it to LInda marie. hahaha). Hope you did well in the contest with this one. I have not even looked yet at the results. I didn't even do it since I am not a haiku person. Luv, Andrea

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

February 12, 2010 at 10:34 PM

Dear Marty, I think I'm going to say "Congratulations" now As I may Forget when YOUR name is in the WINNERS' Circle YOUR Words are " Rejuvinating " YOUR Liege ALWAYS...HG

Margaret Foster

February 12, 2010 at 8:02 PM

The beauty is reflected in your words.....Margaret. thanking you for comments today Marty.

Sara Kendrick

February 12, 2010 at 3:36 PM

Great Haiku that should be in the winner's circle. Good luck in the contest. Last line great because that would be what I would be if I could see the scene in person. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

February 12, 2010 at 1:59 PM

I like the irony in the line "Very deep although shallow." Somehow, I know exactly what you mean. Great haiku, Marty! Love, Carolyn

Doris Culverhouse

February 12, 2010 at 8:44 AM

very nice!! enjoyed reading today.

Kim Hilliker

February 12, 2010 at 7:17 AM

Nice Haiku. Thanks for sharing. I enjoyed it.

David Byrne

February 12, 2010 at 4:53 AM

nice one!

Charmaine Chircop

February 11, 2010 at 11:16 PM

a beauty..Charma

John Beam

February 11, 2010 at 8:03 PM

this is also is beatiful I hope you do well and that you dont take this the wrong way but luck runs out I am greatful for the grace of the Lord Jesus and prayers thanks for comment