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Darkness Clamors

darkness clamors --
   amid dead silence
      a green-eyed phantom 


08/14/16

augustmysteryhaiku

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Joseph May

August 2, 2017 at 10:28 AM

Hello Moon Flower, hope you are doing well, very nice Haiku,.... as Agnes says the last line leaves us something to ponder...best wishes

Matthew Anish

September 24, 2016 at 1:01 AM

This poem can mean many things. I see a monster coming up from a lake. Is that what you meant? Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Agnes Krampe

September 22, 2016 at 4:26 PM

You haiku offers lovely images and leaves something to ponder - I like it!

Andrea Dietrich

September 22, 2016 at 3:17 PM

wow, I really like this if I am interpreting it correctly, a jealous ghost!! Deep!

James Inman

September 4, 2016 at 10:35 AM

Well thought out MF.

Paul Callus

August 17, 2016 at 12:48 PM

You offer so much in just three lines, MF, and you also leave space for our imagination to roam! Regards // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 14, 2016 at 2:10 PM

- Haiku is a great form - This is really lovely, Moon Flower - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Pheko Motaung

August 14, 2016 at 12:35 AM

A wonderful beautiful haiku!well done

Moon Flower

August 14, 2016 at 1:04 AM

Glad to know that you are also fond of short form of poetry such as haiku, senryu et al. Kudos to us. Thanks. ;)

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