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Darkness Clamors

darkness clamors -- amid dead silence a green-eyed phantom 08/14/16

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Date: 8/2/2017 10:28:00 AM

Hello Moon Flower, hope you are doing well, very nice Haiku,.... as Agnes says the last line leaves us something to ponder...best wishes

Date: 9/24/2016 1:01:00 AM

This poem can mean many things. I see a monster coming up from a lake. Is that what you meant? Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Date: 9/22/2016 4:26:00 PM

You haiku offers lovely images and leaves something to ponder - I like it!

Date: 9/22/2016 3:17:00 PM

wow, I really like this if I am interpreting it correctly, a jealous ghost!! Deep!

Date: 9/4/2016 10:35:00 AM

Well thought out MF.

Date: 8/17/2016 12:48:00 PM

You offer so much in just three lines, MF, and you also leave space for our imagination to roam! Regards // paul

Date: 8/14/2016 2:10:00 PM

- Haiku is a great form - This is really lovely, Moon Flower - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Date: 8/14/2016 12:35:00 AM

A wonderful beautiful haiku!well done

Moon Flower
Date: 8/14/2016 1:04:00 AM

Glad to know that you are also fond of short form of poetry such as haiku, senryu et al. Kudos to us. Thanks. ;)