Darkness

Is it a presence of black rays or the absence of light Either ways, its the same plight The time when time chokes tight And only fear seems bright

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 2/3/2016 6:50:00 PM

Hi White Sage, a small but excellent write on the theme. Your simple words paint the image so well. Darkness fills the canvas. This is a little gem and i am glad i did not miss it. It is worthy of the seven. You did not give yourself a simple theme to describe in poetry. You did it really well. A seven for this piece my friend....Vladislav.

White Sage
Date: 2/4/2016 1:06:00 PM

I really appreciate you finding my poems, thanks Vladislav