Darkness

Is it a presence of black rays or the absence of light
Either ways, its the same plight
The time when time chokes tight
And only fear seems bright
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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February 3, 2016 at 6:50 PM
Hi White Sage, a small but excellent write on the theme. Your simple words paint the image so well. Darkness fills the canvas. This is a little gem and i am glad i did not miss it. It is worthy of the seven. You did not give yourself a simple theme to describe in poetry. You did it really well. A seven for this piece my friend....Vladislav.
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February 4, 2016 at 1:06 PM
I really appreciate you finding my poems, thanks Vladislav
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