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Darkness

the darkness is pulling me in drowning me in misery tearing my heart into peices this darkness is destroying my light tearing away my innocence and leaving me all alone in this darkness the seeds of darkness and fear have been planted rooting into my mind and soul making me wither till im nothing more

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Date: 10/9/2015 6:35:00 PM
Poem lacks visceral impact because it's just a tapestry of cliches. Also, there is no punctuation. So sorry, but atleast I'm honest.. Trixie
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