Darkness

the darkness is pulling me in

drowning me in misery

tearing my heart into peices

this darkness is destroying my light

tearing away my innocence

and leaving me all alone in this darkness

the seeds of darkness and fear have been planted

rooting into my mind and soul

making me wither till im nothing more
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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October 9, 2015 at 6:35 PM
Poem lacks visceral impact because it's just a tapestry of cliches. Also, there is no punctuation. So sorry, but atleast I'm honest.. Trixie
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