Darkness

The Darkness has become my light

The Darkness has become my right

The Darkness is now my sight

The darkness has engulfed my life

Now I am afraid of the light
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Devnath  Avatar
June 29, 2011 at 7:34 AM
You have written a magic of darkness along with hidden magic of all. If one is accustomed with a particular thing or habit, he normally refuses the opposite. Nice look of depth.
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June 18, 2011 at 3:38 PM
So powerful, I actually felt these words reading this poem. What a talent, short poem but deep feeling. Awesome a 7 deserved Hemi!!
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June 18, 2011 at 3:38 PM
So powerful, I actually felt these words reading this poem. What a talent, short poem but deep feeling. Awesome a 7 deserved Hemi!!
Jan Avatar
June 18, 2011 at 5:16 AM
How true this can be....powerful words and hope the lightness finds you. Its easier to live in the dark than to move to the light.
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June 18, 2011 at 5:06 AM
A good play on words N :)
Deane Avatar
June 18, 2011 at 4:21 AM
Another well written rhyme, keep writing... will be waiting to read more... shannon
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