Darkness

My mind wants to give up,
  my body has a long time ago;
  Tired of the constant worries,
  always feeling so low.
  
  The spark of hope in the distance,
  is no longer there;
  I am all alone in the darkness,
  I no longer care.

  I can no longer find my way,
  the darkness has made me blind;
  So now I finally surrender,
  My body, soul and mind.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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May 6, 2011 at 5:21 PM
Sad deep write, look closer there is a light.. deep poetry my friend
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