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Darkness

I feel the darkness rolling in... like an old friend who knows all my failures,secrets... all my pain. My heart races this friend never knocks... this friend speaks to me in whispers reminding me of all my inadequacies. I cut I bleed... the pain helps the pain for a moment... is it a punishment is it a protest for what should have been... what should have never been the tears won't come there is no cleansing only darkness I am drowning soon i will be lost again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/5/2010 1:55:00 PM
Wow this one it deep. Feels like the soul is lost and although the body and emotions are tormented, pain seems to be the only comfort. Thats what I feel from this poem. It reminds me of my poem contemplating suicide. Good write
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