Darkness

I feel darkness its everywhere

But I still see shadows fall upon what 

may seem a very dark figure.

Its hideouse scary inormously big.

Im afraid but im queit, It takes the whole

side of the room with it.

It dont leave it just sits there Im so 

unhappy. How can I define it, what may I do 

to stop it. Its comeing, it gets closer. 

Its bringing me down. I try not to let it 

but it does anyway. It dont tak It just
 
stares.

I am the only one who can see it.

Everyone else just sees the pain it causes.

No one understands. I cant keep hideing my 

bags. My eyes are tired, Im always drousy. 

People think Im sick. When Im just sleepy. 

My stomach hurts as it gets closer. Im 

afraid its going to take me away. Please how 

do I stop it Im very afraid.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 5/7/2009 9:03:00 PM
i think this one is my favorite! --maddie
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Date: 5/7/2009 6:15:00 PM
This is awesome poetry ... it is a great psychic write ... genuine emotions, genuine poem ... but an original and good write ... if thes emotions inspire you use them to paint your words on mind ... poetry expels things too. Love.
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