Patri Venkata Ramana Poet Ninette

Darkness

Dark

                                                 Pervades

                                              Silence rules

                                           Curtains of clouds

                                        Hide and seek unfolds

                                            Moaning of wind

                                             Owl's eyes flash

                                                Fright fills

                                                  Gloom

                        

                                               Placed: 1st



Say It In Nine - Old or New Poetry Contest
Ninette poetry form only.
Sponsored by: Joseph May 
Syllable Check:  howmany syllables
Date: 16-08-2022

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Sam Kauffman August 23, 2022 at 10:02 AM Wonderfully spooky Patri. Your vivid images create the scene of gloomy anxiety. Congratulations! Patri Venkata Ramana August 24, 2022 at 7:51 AM Thank you so much for the compliments!

Christuraj Alex August 20, 2022 at 4:53 AM Vivid scenic imagery. Congratulations! Patri Venkata Ramana August 21, 2022 at 8:51 AM Thank you so much for the compliments.

Connie Marcum Wong August 19, 2022 at 8:18 PM This poem would be perfect for Halloween. It is my favorite holiday because my three children used to celebrate their birthdays on that day. They are all born in the first week of November. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Blessings xxoo Patri Venkata Ramana August 21, 2022 at 8:51 AM Thank you so much for your kind compliments.

Joseph May August 19, 2022 at 6:44 AM Dark clouds and the eerie moan of the wind spells gloom, Wonderful write Patri, Congrats on your win Patri Venkata Ramana August 21, 2022 at 8:49 AM Thank you so much for the compliments!