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Darker Still

The moon in shame hides
As clouds invade my sky
And ships brave the tides
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Ponce Avatar
September 23, 2013 at 9:09 AM
This is brief yet incredible!
Kithinji Avatar
January 23, 2014 at 11:46 AM
Jake, Wilma, Sandra Thank you for enjoying yourselves. And making my heart smile.
Neels Avatar
August 11, 2013 at 8:09 AM
Awesome piece Gerald, love the imagery..
Ramacher Avatar
August 10, 2013 at 1:28 PM
Read it once and find its stuck in my head now. Surely a good sign.
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