Darkened Days

I now see the crossroads my time is at hand
I’ve met the devil and proudly taken my stand
With my Lord and my God my heart will stay true
No matter what happens I’ll stand here with you
Your loyalty and wisdom are beyond compare
You gave us your life and paid for our fare
You give love for all, and you go all in
You hold our hearts in your hands and forgive man’s sin
Forgive me my Lord for all that I’ve done
I have let you down and you’ve never cut and run
Please see my heart and know that it’s true
I’m down on my knees, I’m here just for you
Watch my brothers and sisters and their children as well
I pray they believe, and in your kingdom, they’ll dwell
Please help us God I humbly pray
Please help guide us through these darkened days


July 30, 2020

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Mcgee Avatar
August 3, 2020 at 7:24 AM
A heartfelt plea and prayer. Congratulations on your win Mark.
Koplin Avatar
August 3, 2020 at 11:51 AM
Thank you so much Jeanne!
Mishra Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 12:24 AM
Your poem is apowerful expression of blooming hope and faith and it sways in tender strides. Absolutely beautiful. Congratulations on your win Mark :)
Koplin Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 5:43 AM
Thank you so much for your kind words of encouragement
Watt Avatar
July 31, 2020 at 11:13 PM
A humble prayer expressed so poetically, Mark. Only God can shine light upon the darkness of the days ahead. We will need to be on our knees often, praying these words. Congratulations for the win ~ John
Koplin Avatar
August 1, 2020 at 5:32 AM
Thanks John, I'm glad you liked my humble prayer.
Goldsmith Avatar
July 31, 2020 at 6:57 PM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! A wonderful write. I love the last two lines. Enjoy your win and day............
Koplin Avatar
July 31, 2020 at 7:06 PM
Thank you so much for your kind words and comment.
Cunningham Avatar
July 30, 2020 at 10:42 AM
In all this darkness Mark he is the light, follow the path he has illuminated for us and all will be well. Tom
Koplin Avatar
July 30, 2020 at 2:28 PM
The path is hard but I do my best to stay on it. I seem to stray more than I would like but I keep trying. Thanks so much Tom for stopping by. I appreciate you my friend!
Pandit Avatar
July 30, 2020 at 10:05 AM
A powerful write Mark--I felt the intensity of every verse, in words of prayer. Well done!
Koplin Avatar
July 30, 2020 at 2:27 PM
Thank you Vijay! I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for your time my friend.
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