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Darkened Days

I now see the crossroads my time is at hand I’ve met the devil and proudly taken my stand With my Lord and my God my heart will stay true No matter what happens I’ll stand here with you Your loyalty and wisdom are beyond compare You gave us your life and paid for our fare You give love for all, and you go all in You hold our hearts in your hands and forgive man’s sin Forgive me my Lord for all that I’ve done I have let you down and you’ve never cut and run Please see my heart and know that it’s true I’m down on my knees, I’m here just for you Watch my brothers and sisters and their children as well I pray they believe, and in your kingdom, they’ll dwell Please help us God I humbly pray Please help guide us through these darkened days July 30, 2020 STRAND completely new (15) any theme any form Poetry Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 8/3/2020 7:24:00 AM

A heartfelt plea and prayer. Congratulations on your win Mark.

Mark Koplin
Date: 8/3/2020 11:51:00 AM

Thank you so much Jeanne!

Aditi Mishra

Date: 8/2/2020 12:24:00 AM

Your poem is apowerful expression of blooming hope and faith and it sways in tender strides. Absolutely beautiful. Congratulations on your win Mark :)

Mark Koplin
Date: 8/2/2020 5:43:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kind words of encouragement

John Watt

Date: 7/31/2020 11:13:00 PM

A humble prayer expressed so poetically, Mark. Only God can shine light upon the darkness of the days ahead. We will need to be on our knees often, praying these words. Congratulations for the win ~ John

Mark Koplin
Date: 8/1/2020 5:32:00 AM

Thanks John, I'm glad you liked my humble prayer.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/31/2020 6:57:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! A wonderful write. I love the last two lines. Enjoy your win and day............

Mark Koplin
Date: 7/31/2020 7:06:00 PM

Thank you so much for your kind words and comment.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/30/2020 10:42:00 AM

In all this darkness Mark he is the light, follow the path he has illuminated for us and all will be well. Tom

Mark Koplin
Date: 7/30/2020 2:28:00 PM

The path is hard but I do my best to stay on it. I seem to stray more than I would like but I keep trying. Thanks so much Tom for stopping by. I appreciate you my friend!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/30/2020 10:05:00 AM

A powerful write Mark--I felt the intensity of every verse, in words of prayer. Well done!

Mark Koplin
Date: 7/30/2020 2:27:00 PM

Thank you Vijay! I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for your time my friend.