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Dark Whispers

dark whispers took shape
                                         shadowy mortuary chamber
                                              footsteps died away










dark whispers
Copyright© RAJAT KANTI CHAKRABARTY
12 November, 2014

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

November 13, 2014 at 7:11 AM

awesome write.. ! like the second line.. :)

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

November 13, 2014 at 7:24 AM

Thank you Olive, welcome...Love XXXXX rajat

Liam Mcdaid

November 13, 2014 at 5:16 AM

love rajat how you painted this whisper excellent pen beautifully crafted bless you

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

November 13, 2014 at 6:51 AM

Thank you for reading my poems and commenting on this, liam XXXX LOVE XXXX rajat

Kelly Deschler

November 13, 2014 at 2:35 AM

I really like these darker kinds of poems, and yours leaves a good mystery for the reader to unravel. Great work, Rajat. Very haunting!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

November 13, 2014 at 6:49 AM

Thank you Kelly for your nice comments. Love XXXXX rajat

Justin Bordner

November 12, 2014 at 8:55 PM

This write evokes a sense of loneliness yet freedom...suspence of dark awareness, liberty in shallow breath...thoughts of secret life are elicited in me Rajat...J.A.B.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

November 12, 2014 at 11:40 PM

I am so happy you have enjoyed my poem Justin. Love and best wishes xxxxx rajat

Gary Bateman

November 12, 2014 at 4:28 PM

Rajat My Good Friend . . . Enjoyed your latest Haiku here very much!! "The Dark Spirits and Whispers Abound in the Dark Mortuary Chamber." I'm scaring myself here!! This one's a FAV for me. Great Work!! Best Always, Gary

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

November 12, 2014 at 11:38 PM

Thank you Gary. Love and Regards...rajat

Jasmine Cruz

November 12, 2014 at 10:06 AM

very nice Haiku Rajat. you did a great job, nice going my friend

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

November 12, 2014 at 10:21 AM

Thank you Jasmine. Hugs!...rajat

Leon Enriquez

November 12, 2014 at 9:58 AM

Dear Rajat: Yes, you are right. This is true. Leon

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

November 12, 2014 at 10:22 AM

Leon, how are you? Hope you are okay. Thank you for your excellent comment. Love...rajat

Demetrios Trifiatis

November 12, 2014 at 9:36 AM

Excellent Haiku my dear friend, RAJAT!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

November 12, 2014 at 10:25 AM

I have just read your poem "WHO AM I?". A majestic one Demetrios.I am so proud of you. Love...rajat

Eve Roper

November 12, 2014 at 7:44 AM

Good Haiku, Rajat, scary :) eve

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

November 12, 2014 at 8:33 AM

Thank you Eve dear. Great hugs!...rajat

David Meade

November 12, 2014 at 7:42 AM

I worked in a cemetery during the summers while going to college and it is amazing some of the sights and sounds you see and hear -- at least you think you do! Great haiku

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

November 12, 2014 at 8:42 AM

It's great David you work in a cemetery in your free time. Here people are scared of the words: cemetery, graveyard, crematorium, morgue, autopsy etc. Why I do not know. It does not make sense. So this poetry comes up. Spooks are good for fun. Love for reading. Hugs!...rajat

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