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Dark Whispers

dark whispers took shape
                                         shadowy mortuary chamber
                                              footsteps died away










dark whispers
Copyright© RAJAT KANTI CHAKRABARTY
12 November, 2014

Copyright © Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty | Year Posted 2014

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 11/13/2014 7:11:00 AM awesome write.. ! like the second line.. :) Login to Reply Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty Date: 11/13/2014 7:24:00 AM Thank you Olive, welcome...Love XXXXX rajat

Liam Mcdaid Date: 11/13/2014 5:16:00 AM love rajat how you painted this whisper excellent pen beautifully crafted bless you Login to Reply Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty Date: 11/13/2014 6:51:00 AM Thank you for reading my poems and commenting on this, liam XXXX LOVE XXXX rajat

Kelly Deschler Date: 11/13/2014 2:35:00 AM I really like these darker kinds of poems, and yours leaves a good mystery for the reader to unravel. Great work, Rajat. Very haunting! Login to Reply Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty Date: 11/13/2014 6:49:00 AM Thank you Kelly for your nice comments. Love XXXXX rajat

Justin Bordner Date: 11/12/2014 8:55:00 PM This write evokes a sense of loneliness yet freedom...suspence of dark awareness, liberty in shallow breath...thoughts of secret life are elicited in me Rajat...J.A.B. Login to Reply Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty Date: 11/12/2014 11:40:00 PM I am so happy you have enjoyed my poem Justin. Love and best wishes xxxxx rajat

Gary Bateman Date: 11/12/2014 4:28:00 PM Rajat My Good Friend . . . Enjoyed your latest Haiku here very much!! "The Dark Spirits and Whispers Abound in the Dark Mortuary Chamber." I'm scaring myself here!! This one's a FAV for me. Great Work!! Best Always, Gary Login to Reply Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty Date: 11/12/2014 11:38:00 PM Thank you Gary. Love and Regards...rajat

Jasmine Cruz Date: 11/12/2014 10:06:00 AM very nice Haiku Rajat. you did a great job, nice going my friend Login to Reply Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty Date: 11/12/2014 10:21:00 AM Thank you Jasmine. Hugs!...rajat

Leon Enriquez Date: 11/12/2014 9:58:00 AM Dear Rajat: Yes, you are right. This is true. Leon Login to Reply Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty Date: 11/12/2014 10:22:00 AM Leon, how are you? Hope you are okay. Thank you for your excellent comment. Love...rajat

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 11/12/2014 9:36:00 AM Excellent Haiku my dear friend, RAJAT! Login to Reply Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty Date: 11/12/2014 10:25:00 AM I have just read your poem "WHO AM I?". A majestic one Demetrios.I am so proud of you. Love...rajat

Eve Roper Date: 11/12/2014 7:44:00 AM Good Haiku, Rajat, scary :) eve Login to Reply Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty Date: 11/12/2014 8:33:00 AM Thank you Eve dear. Great hugs!...rajat

David Meade Date: 11/12/2014 7:42:00 AM I worked in a cemetery during the summers while going to college and it is amazing some of the sights and sounds you see and hear -- at least you think you do! Great haiku Login to Reply Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty Date: 11/12/2014 8:42:00 AM It's great David you work in a cemetery in your free time. Here people are scared of the words: cemetery, graveyard, crematorium, morgue, autopsy etc. Why I do not know. It does not make sense. So this poetry comes up. Spooks are good for fun. Love for reading. Hugs!...rajat