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Dark Whispers

dark whispers took shape shadowy mortuary chamber footsteps died away dark whispers Copyright© RAJAT KANTI CHAKRABARTY 12 November, 2014

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Date: 11/13/2014 7:11:00 AM
awesome write.. ! like the second line.. :)
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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 11/13/2014 7:24:00 AM
Thank you Olive, welcome...Love XXXXX rajat
Date: 11/13/2014 5:16:00 AM
love rajat how you painted this whisper excellent pen beautifully crafted bless you
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Date: 11/13/2014 6:51:00 AM
Thank you for reading my poems and commenting on this, liam XXXX LOVE XXXX rajat
Date: 11/13/2014 2:35:00 AM
I really like these darker kinds of poems, and yours leaves a good mystery for the reader to unravel. Great work, Rajat. Very haunting!
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Date: 11/13/2014 6:49:00 AM
Thank you Kelly for your nice comments. Love XXXXX rajat
Date: 11/12/2014 8:55:00 PM
This write evokes a sense of loneliness yet freedom...suspence of dark awareness, liberty in shallow breath...thoughts of secret life are elicited in me Rajat...J.A.B.
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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 11/12/2014 11:40:00 PM
I am so happy you have enjoyed my poem Justin. Love and best wishes xxxxx rajat
Date: 11/12/2014 4:28:00 PM
Rajat My Good Friend . . . Enjoyed your latest Haiku here very much!! "The Dark Spirits and Whispers Abound in the Dark Mortuary Chamber." I'm scaring myself here!! This one's a FAV for me. Great Work!! Best Always, Gary
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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 11/12/2014 11:38:00 PM
Thank you Gary. Love and Regards...rajat
Date: 11/12/2014 10:06:00 AM
very nice Haiku Rajat. you did a great job, nice going my friend
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Date: 11/12/2014 10:21:00 AM
Thank you Jasmine. Hugs!...rajat
Date: 11/12/2014 9:58:00 AM
Dear Rajat: Yes, you are right. This is true. Leon
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Date: 11/12/2014 10:22:00 AM
Leon, how are you? Hope you are okay. Thank you for your excellent comment. Love...rajat
Date: 11/12/2014 9:36:00 AM
Excellent Haiku my dear friend, RAJAT!
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Date: 11/12/2014 10:25:00 AM
I have just read your poem "WHO AM I?". A majestic one Demetrios.I am so proud of you. Love...rajat
Date: 11/12/2014 7:44:00 AM
Good Haiku, Rajat, scary :) eve
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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 11/12/2014 8:33:00 AM
Thank you Eve dear. Great hugs!...rajat
Date: 11/12/2014 7:42:00 AM
I worked in a cemetery during the summers while going to college and it is amazing some of the sights and sounds you see and hear -- at least you think you do! Great haiku
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Date: 11/12/2014 8:42:00 AM
It's great David you work in a cemetery in your free time. Here people are scared of the words: cemetery, graveyard, crematorium, morgue, autopsy etc. Why I do not know. It does not make sense. So this poetry comes up. Spooks are good for fun. Love for reading. Hugs!...rajat

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