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Dark Spirit

Where did you come from what exactly are you Evil lurks in your lum your works are not queue you prey on the weak so you can feel strong these words I do speak until transformation comes along you feed into famine and sickness you allow your arm is as a talon you rip the flesh you vow some may not understand this I hope that soon will dissipate this longing for a world of bliss I cry out to annotate *This poem came to mind after reading Revelations

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Date: 12/31/2020 10:53:00 AM
Even those who are not savvy with the bible, your words can make sense, because 'darkness' effects everyone, and so does the yearning for a better tomorrow. ~ Best regards // paul
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 1/3/2021 4:50:00 PM
Thank you, Paul :)
Date: 12/31/2020 6:42:00 AM
May the dark spirit pass soon--let world of bliss reign! Deep thoughts, Angela.
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 1/3/2021 4:50:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay :)
Date: 12/30/2020 9:01:00 AM
I truly enjoyed this write. Thank you.
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 12/30/2020 6:53:00 PM
Thank you, Rob :)
Date: 12/29/2020 5:31:00 AM
I like the ink you bleed with...all questions are clearly answered in due time...Nice one
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 12/30/2020 8:12:00 AM
Thank you, Arturo :)
Date: 12/28/2020 12:09:00 PM
Revelations reveals a lot of what is happening in our time and space, but the Book of Revelations is a little scary to those that read it for the first time. My Honors thesis at Varsity was the Spirituality of the New Testament but that was several moons ago! I love your poem, and how you depict what you read. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 12/30/2020 8:12:00 AM
Thank you, Jennifer :)
Date: 12/27/2020 10:27:00 PM
Powerful poetry, Angela, love it...
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 12/30/2020 8:12:00 AM
Thank you, harry :)
Date: 12/27/2020 10:13:00 PM
I have began reading the book several times and even with explanations, but rarely managed more than a few chapters, plus extracts from daily bible reading. A dark poem but positive ending. ~~
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 12/30/2020 8:11:00 AM
Thank you, Victor :)

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