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Dark Silence

( DARK SILENCE ) To you I would surrender, and take down the wall. Pour out my heart, just to see if it would fall. It seems no greater a distance, have I found to suffice. To hinder this feeling, I harbor to entice. The restless excitement, perils of indecision. Trapped beneath the layers, together forming my prison. Hidden by walls of words, bound by bars of sight. All that come to life, when concealed by the night. I die to speak, to finally reach out. To let him know, I can't do without. These secrets of sort, I must keep to me. for those who don't know, That's all that they see.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/2/2014 11:46:00 AM
I like the rhyme. very smart. I like the imagery. there is a certain youthful passion, almost an outburst, that is very appealing. good piece.
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Date: 10/31/2014 10:40:00 PM
Nice!
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Jasmine Cruz
Date: 10/31/2014 11:16:00 PM
thanks you again
Date: 10/31/2014 6:24:00 AM
Nice, I like this write.
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Jasmine Cruz
Date: 10/31/2014 7:20:00 AM
Thank you Maurice. Happy Halloween

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