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Where have You gone Consumed by tears and mournful dirge Silent poetry flows with lamented wind Thy gaunt Look wanes Each night. Dark roots Embrace thee, Deep-seated sorrow unsettling and numbing. Erstwhile bitter struggles, hesitating in darkness; Thy soft Bare lips Grave laden. Darkness awakes The unhurried Moon, cooling the unburnished fractured heart; Never an earthly seraph to console Thy lament Dissipating soul’s Ceaseless ache. 1/3/2021 Trinet Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Joseph May

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Date: 1/24/2021 1:38:00 PM
Creative winner that you have penned. Congrats. Sara
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Date: 1/21/2021 12:06:00 PM
Wow Eve, I love this poem - astounding work my friend, such phenomenal imagination and creativity. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
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Date: 1/20/2021 11:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A creative and deep write. You make words come alive. Enjoy your win/day with blessings............
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Date: 1/20/2021 10:32:00 AM
Very deep, touching poem. Congratulations.
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Date: 1/20/2021 9:39:00 AM
Eve, this is so beautifully rendered, stirring and profound. Congratulations on your well deserved win. :=)
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Date: 1/20/2021 6:48:00 AM
Such a wonderful write Eve. So deep. Congrats on your win. Have a blessed lovely day. Hugs ~ Ani
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Date: 1/19/2021 6:03:00 PM
such a touching poem Eve and i love the image, well penned congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/19/2021 6:22:00 AM
Beautiful write Eve Congrats on your win..
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Date: 1/3/2021 6:30:00 AM
Hi, Eve. That is a remarkable image; it's theme so penetrating. So much is said; so touching and powerful. Blessings. Thks for your comment on 'Reckoning'.
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Date: 1/3/2021 1:49:00 AM
A creative delight that shares an enchanting sight... so beautiful. God B L E S S you with a win, my friend.
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