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Dark Roots Embrace Thee

Where have You gone Consumed by tears and mournful dirge Silent poetry flows with lamented wind Thy gaunt Look wanes Each night. Dark roots Embrace thee, Deep-seated sorrow unsettling and numbing. Erstwhile bitter struggles, hesitating in darkness; Thy soft Bare lips Grave laden. Darkness awakes The unhurried Moon, cooling the unburnished fractured heart; Never an earthly seraph to console Thy lament Dissipating soul’s Ceaseless ache. 1/3/2021 Trinet Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Joseph May
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Kendrick Avatar
January 24, 2021 at 1:38 PM
Creative winner that you have penned. Congrats. Sara
Proxenos Avatar
January 21, 2021 at 12:06 PM
Wow Eve, I love this poem - astounding work my friend, such phenomenal imagination and creativity. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
Goldsmith Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 11:04 AM
Congratulations on your win. A creative and deep write. You make words come alive. Enjoy your win/day with blessings............
Evans Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 10:32 AM
Very deep, touching poem. Congratulations.
Buehler Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 9:39 AM
Eve, this is so beautifully rendered, stirring and profound. Congratulations on your well deserved win. :=)
Jayasankar Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 6:48 AM
Such a wonderful write Eve. So deep. Congrats on your win. Have a blessed lovely day. Hugs ~ Ani
Allison Avatar
January 19, 2021 at 6:03 PM
such a touching poem Eve and i love the image, well penned congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
May Avatar
January 19, 2021 at 6:22 AM
Beautiful write Eve Congrats on your win..
Johnson Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 6:30 AM
Hi, Eve. That is a remarkable image; it's theme so penetrating. So much is said; so touching and powerful. Blessings. Thks for your comment on 'Reckoning'.
Mcintosh Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 1:49 AM
A creative delight that shares an enchanting sight... so beautiful. God B L E S S you with a win, my friend.
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