Scott Neely Poet Rhyme

Dark of the Night

In the dark of the night
Staring at the ceiling
My heart is torn apart
I hate this feeling
In the dark of the night
I hate this feeling
Is your heart torn apart?
How are you feeling?

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Newton Ranaweera August 4, 2020 at 1:26 PM Rain, thou art so serene!!

Newton Ranaweera August 4, 2020 at 1:23 PM a short dramatic scene that ends with question instead of a deliberate resolution. A little star! Scott Neely August 9, 2020 at 4:22 PM Thanks!