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Dark Night Soul

I love you Because I hate myself This is my impression Lavished you in praise and wonder Promised to be 'yours' forever I'd complete you in my quest of Deep misapprehension But I can't help but think The look you gave me Was one of confusion I fear that you may turn on me And redefine my boundaries Where I end and you begin Declined invitation And so I must destroy you If I am to survive No negotiation

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Megan Childress

Date: 2/24/2009 7:06:00 PM

that was like totally well theres not even a word to describe how great that was this is like the poem of my life right now I so love it

Sara Lokken

Date: 2/2/2009 11:58:00 AM

Love cannot be unconditional unless it sees everything. That was the meaning of my poem you commented on today. And sadly, he is real, inside him, I know there's something beautiful, but he is afraid to admit it or have someone look into his soul (like you described yourself as being). I have a question for you...you would destroy the one you love to survive....but can you survive if you kill the one thing that allows us to be alive in the first place? Just a thought. Love your comments.Sara

Ridge Mayberry

Date: 2/1/2009 9:55:00 AM

noone can define who you are but yourself. many people have tried to change me but i refuse to be changed for i see nothing wrong. I am who I am, nothing more nothing less, and i love myself. love yourself and noone can change or redefine your boundaries. Love for all the world, Ridge

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 1/14/2009 10:49:00 AM

A lot of deep soul searching here... you certainly don't need your boundaries redefined. I once tried that with a close lady friend and got my wings clipped! Great piece Yoni!! Best wishes, Keith

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 1/14/2009 3:13:00 AM

all we can do is hope we learn to heal ourselves so we can open up and move forward towards a new age. well said, Kristin