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Dark Night of the Soul

despair knocks the door
hallucinating the mind
tormenting the soul

darkness dispels light 
sinister black shadows loom
unhinging spirit

an evil fiend tempts 
execrable ideas
drowning to abysm





3-31-2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/6/2016 5:19:00 AM
Wow! Reminds me of a time about a year ago. A follow up whereby the soul is reignited would make a good read! Rob :)
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 4/6/2016 6:50:00 AM
Thank you Rob
Date: 4/1/2016 5:52:00 AM
well if your intention was to portray a brilliant uneasy feeling in your piece...righteously done:), jill
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 4/1/2016 7:35:00 AM
Thank you Jill
Date: 3/31/2016 9:58:00 PM
Number 2 gets my vote. Well done Navda
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 4/1/2016 7:36:00 AM
Thank you Charlie

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