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Dark Mountain

dark mountain cradles black cloud in lofty jagged heights.. sudden thunder rolls rain pours from dark cloud storm dissipates in minutes... bright sun heats mountain

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/19/2012 4:56:00 PM

Hey, this is fantastic, Sara. GREAT imagery.

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/19/2012 4:44:00 PM

Wonderful descriptive haiku, Sara. I enjoyed reading them. Love, Kim

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/19/2012 1:29:00 PM

we have also experienced this beautiful scene of storm and Sun Sara .. u described it so intently .. sorry for all your pain now for Doris and hubby 5too ..just wrote on blog luv..pray all goes well with everyone..

Joseph May

Date: 7/19/2012 12:54:00 PM

nice haiku Sara...I love the first stanza....always..Joseph

Richard Palmer

Date: 7/19/2012 11:26:00 AM

from rain to sunshine,great write Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/19/2012 11:21:00 AM

from dark to bright.. what a lovely image from your vivid mind, sara... hope abounds.. very nice!..) huggs!