Dark Mountain

dark mountain cradles black cloud in lofty jagged heights.. sudden thunder rolls rain pours from dark cloud storm dissipates in minutes... bright sun heats mountain
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
July 19, 2012 at 4:56 PM
Hey, this is fantastic, Sara. GREAT imagery.
Merryman Avatar
July 19, 2012 at 4:44 PM
Wonderful descriptive haiku, Sara. I enjoyed reading them. Love, Kim
Sweetheart Avatar
July 19, 2012 at 1:29 PM
we have also experienced this beautiful scene of storm and Sun Sara .. u described it so intently .. sorry for all your pain now for Doris and hubby 5too ..just wrote on blog luv..pray all goes well with everyone..
May Avatar
July 19, 2012 at 12:54 PM
nice haiku Sara...I love the first stanza....always..Joseph
Palmer Avatar
July 19, 2012 at 11:26 AM
from rain to sunshine,great write Sara
Onclaud Avatar
July 19, 2012 at 11:21 AM
from dark to bright.. what a lovely image from your vivid mind, sara... hope abounds.. very nice!..) huggs!
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