dark dreary day

somber sullen clouds
gray Acheronian sky
day for a murder
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Bauer Avatar
May 9, 2025 at 9:37 AM
Ha! Not what I was expecting, but made me laugh, Caren!
Krutsinger Avatar
May 9, 2025 at 7:42 PM
I can be so awful
Theraven Avatar
May 8, 2025 at 8:22 PM
Caren, Oh fine, I'll look it up. Hmm, this 'Acheronian' not a waste of five syllables after all. Though my initial comment may be. You killed it. -Richard
Krutsinger Avatar
May 9, 2025 at 7:42 PM
thank you my friend
Rodrigues Avatar
May 8, 2025 at 7:23 PM
Great wording! Watch out!
Krutsinger Avatar
May 9, 2025 at 7:43 PM
watch out indeed
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