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Dark Depression

Dark Depression Suicidal Thoughts 11-18-08 William L. Moore Let go of all the strife Just snuff out my life Make a strong fist And Slit my Wrist Make me cry Hope to die Call to get help Only to Yelp I can not stall Just end it all Would anyone care? If only I dare Would someone come by? To check, to say goodbye No one would crave The stink that would Rave This was written when the whole world was falling down around me. When life was not important any more.

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Date: 6/28/2011 10:08:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us today William. It was a pleasure to read. Hope life is treating you better now my friend. Have a wonderful inspiration filled day my friend. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/28/2011 7:46:00 AM
Felt that way. Poetry and Country walks. Used my people who care to talk to. Little drink.Shopped for stimulation. Fished for natural grace and levelled all with returns to the church dispite useless priest in the family. got there.Cannot believe I sucked my brain out out the quagmire of mud and suicidal thoughts to get to this position. Next plan meet someboby nice but make sure you don't let her possible loss get to you. Hope none of this apoplies to you though but if so try it. Rgds Ian F
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